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Chapter 2 of :iconberggie: 's PowerPlay saga written by my lovely fiance. Worry not, everyone, I'm not going to let him steal my DA for all his writing. In fact I have a picture that is done and ready to post but I need a feeeew more pageviews if you catch my drift ;)

This chapter has our stars Mai and April on their first date and it definitely moves...quickly. But from here on out things should definitely be picking up! Hope you all enjoy it, I know Proto enjoyed writing it and I love reading his stuff so here ya go! See you guys soon :D

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PowerPlay and April belong to :iconberggie:
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Awesome stuff! love the descriptions and details :)
the only issue i had was that it seemed a little rushed... like it was running and gunning through to get to the expansion stuff... and Mai's reaction to a dream come true sitting on her couch seemed a little underwhelming...
But its an awesome installment and i can't wait to read the next one! great job!